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It was an excellent poem, very visual. Keep writing!

I wrote this yesterday morning after finding out one of the puppys my fathers dog had given birth to a few days ago had died, because the pallet in it's mouth was split and it couldn't eat. Thats the feedback for the poem... Be gentle.. Doggy-Dog World To the pup, Who could not feed. This poem wrot...

Yes, Im new. Few people know me and I tell all you others who dont... YOU SHOULD! Novice at poetry.. student of drama.. The words I write come from my heart but are transferred from pencil to paper, the spoken and written word are two different things, vibrant and telling, wild almost with all their...

Hey I really liked this poem, 'twas a bit visual; but isnt that what people want in poems? First the crunch as she surrendered to metal, rolling beneath me - struggling for breath, the snapping of bone and the dragging of flesh, the inadequacy of fur on the asphalt. -- Waaaaayyyyyy Grody! But still ...

This is the first poem I ever wrote, my mother and I had a little disagreement; and now we don't speak to eachother... being 13 years of age im nearlly only fit to be called a novice; But I would still like to know how much potential I have by presenting this poem to you all. You made a promise to ...