Poetry Forum

Thank you both for your replies. In regards to if it's written for myself or others, I'm honestly not quite sure. I guess I would say myself? I wrote it in about 10 minute and only read over once quickly before posting for feedback, but that's the way I like to write at the moment. Then over time I'...

Loss is the greatest worst feeling you’ll ever know, Heartache, misery, anguish; how can I grow? The forever pain of love, memories and childhood delight left me in the dark as I stand without you, I strive for better times, fearless times, worthy times when I had just about everything I needed. Inc...

“best friends” we said, but that was the first time. you decided to turn away, sheer pain, jealousy, unrefined wannabe. “best friends” we said, it happened again. was this time worth it? could we try to resolve this? “best friends” we said, a third time now? here i am alone as you shun me to the wor...

the weight has been lifted; you’re gone. unneeded, unwanted, undefined. a toxic waste of time, regretful and unwise. “best friends” we said, but that was the first time. when you decided to turn away, sheer pain, jealousy, unrefined wannabe. “best friends” we said, it happened again. was this time w...

Hiya Anongirl, this is a well worn theme for a first write, and you pretty much followed the first poem fashion of simple rhyme schemes which did not interest me. The half rhymes in Lonely, sad, that feeling inside - the taste just wont pass, the taste just wont die. and The only way for the taste ...

Today it tastes sad, lonely inside. But tomorrow will taste bad, fighting for life. I try to move on, finding a way. But the taste just wont go, the taste stays all day. Lonely, sad, that feeling inside - the taste just wont pass, the taste just wont die. My heart beats faster as I'm trying to say; ...