Poetry Forum

twoleftfeet wrote:Doh!
Mick means that you crit 2 poems by OTHER PEOPLE!

Doh indeed I am so sorry about this. i will do so as soon as i come back from class.

Awww *hugs Nicola* thank you i really appreciate it

Thank you Jester and thank you once again for not being rude. The old forum i was from was very rude to newcomers and people who made mistakes and its only human to make them. Now lets see... 1. I thought my poem could flow better with good use of a rhythmic pattern. 2.I wish it held much more of a ...

My poems are usually rather lenghtly and this is one of the shortest ones i have made. The beautiful ocean calls me, I run out and See it sparkle against the moon light, I lay on the sand, look at the dark blanket over My head, sequences shine through, I feel like I’m in A sandwich of beauty And I’m...

Hey can i get my PM's enabled too? *pretty please*

Thank you morning star that is certianly very kind of you
Hope you are enjoying it here

Hi everyone i am looking forward to getting to know you all here and am looking forward to seeing your poetry. i shall post a few too