Not really happy with the 2nd verse? Help?
Stillness without serenity,
Movement beyond vision,
The time with no second,
hand that is hidden.
Quietening with chatter,
More rest through exertion,
Till death do us contemplate,
human condition.
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- Mon Feb 05, 2007 2:29 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Contemplation
- Replies: 2
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- Mon Feb 05, 2007 2:17 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Dim
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2876
- Mon Feb 05, 2007 2:05 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: somthing in my head
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2576
- Mon Jan 29, 2007 1:02 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Autumn (Hydref)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3090
- Fri Jan 26, 2007 1:58 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Girls
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- Thu Jan 25, 2007 2:40 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Manicman
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2634
- Thu Jan 25, 2007 11:40 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Manicman
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2634
- Thu Jan 25, 2007 10:06 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Manicman
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2634
Manicman
All is calm and peaceful, I wait, he lingers, I walk from room to room, Unsettled i get out the duster, I begin to clean with speed, Aware he waits to come, Ever reaching grasp of unseen powerful fingers, My mind begins to race, Nervous apprehension, I stomp with speed and dust my way, Slam without ...
- Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:51 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Mister Crocodile
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2967
- Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:48 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: 1st post
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2318
- Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:46 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: I
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1411
- Wed Jan 24, 2007 2:19 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: 1st post
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2318
oops
no probs
- Wed Jan 24, 2007 1:10 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: I
- Replies: 4
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I
Such things of great potential
Beauty love innate so true
To look within thyself
To realise I am, as you..
Beauty love innate so true
To look within thyself
To realise I am, as you..
- Wed Jan 24, 2007 1:04 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: 1st post
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2318
1st post
waiting watching
hoping hurting
tensions building
close to bursting
pain is deep
my eyes are full
feel so weak just want to kill
kill the pain and kill the hurt
think my dreams about to burst
hoping hurting
tensions building
close to bursting
pain is deep
my eyes are full
feel so weak just want to kill
kill the pain and kill the hurt
think my dreams about to burst