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- Sun Feb 11, 2007 4:44 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Three Little Words
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2825
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At the risk of using the word cute, that is how I would describe this. You must have a secret crush! ![Wink :wink:](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
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- Thu Feb 08, 2007 5:48 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Fall to Pieces
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3214
Fall to Pieces
Observing the design
of your mind is
like laying in ancient ruins
Foreign and sad
full of history
not completely understood
however, knowing
it is quite easy
to fall to pieces
of your mind is
like laying in ancient ruins
Foreign and sad
full of history
not completely understood
however, knowing
it is quite easy
to fall to pieces
- Thu Feb 08, 2007 5:41 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Fire Moth
- Replies: 15
- Views: 4668
- Thu Feb 08, 2007 5:34 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Smooth Operator (Achtung!)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 953
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hey my fire....
Musical poetry with simple and clever rhythms. Good little diddy.
heidi
Musical poetry with simple and clever rhythms. Good little diddy.
heidi
- Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:47 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Dim
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2876
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Hi Yesterday... I enjoyed the poem. Your writing here is short and compact. I do enjoy short poems as well. An image of the writer producing his words in the first stanza, w/: Words form before expected/And hairs of brightness brush/Thin letters on the page. Introspection is apparent in the beginnin...
- Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:21 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Find Peace
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1881
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Hi Dave...
Thank you for your insight. Hopefully my post to Yesterday answers your question. I'm glad that you liked the poem. As far as my punctuation is concerned I am quite loose with it. However if you have specific suggestions let me know. Thanks for your time and cheers to you!
heidi
Thank you for your insight. Hopefully my post to Yesterday answers your question. I'm glad that you liked the poem. As far as my punctuation is concerned I am quite loose with it. However if you have specific suggestions let me know. Thanks for your time and cheers to you!
heidi
- Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:18 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: disregard
- Replies: 1
- Views: 919
disregard
disregard this...sorry
- Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:14 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Find Peace
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1881
- Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:38 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Mister Crocodile
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2964
- Sat Feb 03, 2007 6:32 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Find Peace
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1881
Find Peace
Find Peace Sister gone, Brother flown no talk, no listen Last night, I dreamt that you and I were laughing like little children. Sleeping to the bone. Temporary death, circling breath thorn of crown on that Christmas rosary Find grace, find small The drugs are safe in the corner closet down the hall...
- Fri Feb 02, 2007 7:11 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Twelve
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2714
- Fri Feb 02, 2007 5:34 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Autumn (Hydref)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3090
- Fri Feb 02, 2007 5:27 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Diesel
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2631