Poetry Forum

maybe swap books or looks...
...but i like...its a sweet one...

i can just imagine u scribbling it down with the sound of your mothers foot steps coming up the stairs.

I’d love to say I love you,
but I’m too scared to.
You’d probably just ignore me,
So I don’t think I ever will.

i like that one....it make realise i should do a lot more in my waking life

very nice, i enjoy...i just think u should swap the word fucker with something else, not that i have a problem with swears in poems.

smoking makes you holy, indeed!

i love this song, its so beautiful, i think johny cash is fantastic.

i am also a NIN fan, and i must admit, i prefer cashes version of the song. and im what some people class as a goth!

that makes me smile. its good, i tataly understand it. keep it up

very nice!

Sleeping to
the bone.

Shirt, jacket, pants
strewn over the
lonely chair

i totaly love the lonely chair image

I woke up this morning fast asleep, and dragged my corpse out of bed. It’s too cold in Hell and I’m too tired. Every mirror I see you in you always look shattered. On the wet crumbling streets insipid zombies push brooms around empty boxes. I step to you, you step to me, please leave me alone, I’m t...

There in the semi-dark
Laughter twinkles softly
Between windows, and flickers
In the street light


thats a really nice line

'Laughter twinkles softly
Between windows' thats very nice

(sorry, im not much of a critic)

Ambition’s hard to gain with no manner of control, drifting round in circles and living off the dole. Dragged up in the morning and thrown to bed at night, start to feel the pressure of living an empty life. Look into the future at days of shame and squander. The Critic is the enemy, laughing when y...