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Naked Analysis

Two sessions then a break
No cuddling just proximity
No need for a couch
Eyes not facing
Just lying besides

Here is my peace at twilight, darkness shades the colours green and grey my door is open to autumn breezes cool but reassuring they bring life. But night is calling nature to sleep Back in my stillness at eventide’s end I can hear the outside calling it’s shroud down to complete my melancholy, Night...

Hi Bhikku, I am new to this Forum and sharing my poems. I like the poem a lot - full of frustration with yourself and just a longing/desire to be calm (solace) The space of the poem feels a little crowded to me. I wonder if you broke it up into two lines at a time with a space line between it would ...

Hi Liliaea, Just read your poem which is the first I have read on this Forum and the first to give comments on. I like it a lot It brings an immediacy of emotion which is great. The first three words knock you into the sadness of one word's failure. In a few lines you fill me with the power of the l...