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by Boyd
Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:05 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: Cycle
Replies: 0
Views: 843

Cycle

I am a new member from the US. This is the first poem I've posted here. Any comments, critiques, or words of wisdom will be appreciated. Boyd Cycle It comes: the dissolution of earth until only a mirage remains. Waters desiccate in puffs of vapor; fires of life diminish to scattered sparks. Air ceas...
by Boyd
Sun Jan 09, 2005 11:07 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: my sister's drawing, my point of view
Replies: 3
Views: 1419

Hi yesterday, I enjoyed reading your poem; the images made it easy to "see" your sister bent over her drawing and to feel your admiration for her and her art. I have a few suggestions for you to consider or to leave alone. The title: would work well with the omission of; "my point of ...
by Boyd
Sun Jan 09, 2005 10:06 pm
Forum: Poetry Discussion
Topic: Spelling and Punctuation
Replies: 10
Views: 6813

Hi, I'm new to this site and just learning my way around. I'm glad to see that correct spelling and punctuation are taken to be an indication of a person's serious attempt at poetry. I'm only half way through Eats, Shoots and Leaves , so I hope there are no errors in this. :) I'm looking forward to ...