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You break me. Like the promises that have lured me in, for years. I have followed. Them, like we were on the treasure hunt of the century. Sweet words buried. Only just outside my reaching, always. Waiting, longing, hoping. As they, slowly but surely. All turned sour. Providing their foundation wit...

Hi Lil, Welcome to the forum. Where are you from? This poem is very simply set out and appealing. I like it’s format and the message it conveys. My only query is hearts getting sold. Doesn’t quite fit the poem. I like the image however the poem does not seem to be going in this direction. The poem ...

We Are all human Bodies of water Dreams of gold We Are all human Minds like fire Hearts get sold We Are all human Breathing in air Crispy and cold We Are all human Spirits of earth All grow old *So, I'm new here and English isn't my first language so I'm sorry if I make any spelling mistakes along ...

It's almost like I'm reading the lines grow into a garden of poetry. It's like a spell.

Hi,
I'm new as well and English also isn't my first language so I get your insecurities there. But I think you did a great job and I'm excited to see what's coming from you!