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Decease and desist Who cares if we exist Damage done, it's too late What comes next will seal our fate Decease and desist All this beauty will be missed Leave this place to the rats To thrive in this gaunt habitat Decease and desist Hope was to be reminisced Some goodness in humanity? An undiscernin...

How good is that. It's one of those, "i'm jealous of that" poems. Brilliant.

Absolutely spot on Az. This is a song. Won't be everyones cup of tea coz it's shouted along to Hardcore Punk. But I like the challenge of avoiding cliches in that genre of music and try out lyrics that are challenging.

Glad you enjoyed it. Cheers.

Excellent. Now with reading it with your insight, I find it really does subtly show what your trying to convey. Don't knock it down. It's certainly one to be proud of

Really enjoyed reading this one. The only bit that leaves me thinking unclearly is "myth their common trait". Are you just simply implying that the truth between free-will and pre-ordained fate is shrouded in a haze of confusement of half truths and passed on stories?

Deliciously dark in my opinion. It's certainly one of those poems that you enjoy reading over and over and get something new out of it each time.

Really enjoyed reading this one. Nice flow to it.

I
Myself
Condemned
Alone
Ignored
Unasked
Outcast
Surplus
Helpless
Abstain
in Vain
Blacked Out
I shout
Reject
Reject
Reject

This was my life
Which was denied

TRANSISTOR TOO MUCH DEPENDANCY FAR TOO MUCH RELIANCE AND WHEN THINGS GO WRONG WE BLAME IT ON THE SCIENCE A DIGITAL LAMENT A DIGITAL LAMENT WHERE'S OUR CONTINGENCY WHERE'S THE FORWARD PLANNING THE MODERN AGE DOES WITHOUT HUMAN INTERACTION A DIGITAL LAMENT A DIGITAL LAMENT TRANSISTOR TRANSISTOR TRANSI...