Poetry Forum

thanks alex, its was one of the first poems i ever wrote, and ive just decided to post it now! As i sed to AS, i might invest in a spell checker :D that may help me... But i think i might take it apart and change a few things... and i know what you mean about the changing from abstract terms into mo...

well i am the worlds worst speler! and i did just write this as a little bit of a piss take!! but am glad a could make you laugh! But my other ones are not as bad, i can assure you!

The sweat, dripping from her dew swept nose, Her heavy, lung deep panting, rupturing his heart, His sharp breaths, mimicked by her own. She teases, tantalises and torments his errect body, While he correses her, commands her, conquer's her, Controling her every movement. With the tips of his fingers...

Oh pity the blushing being that walks alone,
For their darling does not appear.

Oh prey for the being that has not,
Not yet sampled natures tear.

Oh give light, of love and feeling,
To those who have never felt.

For one day you, might indeed, emotionally melt.

The warm delicious, after meal present, That warms the cockles and is ever so pleasant; Pudding, pudding, what shall it be? Pudding, pudding, we shall soon see! With spoonfulls of sweet delectable jam, That smooths the throat after veggies and lamb. The warming sensation, that caresses your throat, ...

A poppy flower is one of nature's creations, Yet the spawn immense evil. One natural women can give birth to one natural child, Yet that child could un-naturaly murder thousands. A world leader can protect thousands of lives, Yet not there own. This may be nature warning us of something, Something t...

Sergant... How come i am killing? How come i have blood on my hands? How come i know not of the value of life? How come sergant? How come? Sergant... Why has that man just been shot? Why has that woman just been raped? Why has that village just been blown up? Why sergant? Why? Sergant... When did we...

As I stand here, holding you here so very tight, As I laugh heartly, bold and outright, As I take your hand, so soft, so gentle and so very white, I become, totaly enthrawled, by You... As we walk, gingerly, into the light, As we run, rapidly, into the night, As we stumble, together, with-out fright...

I once saw a vision... A vision of a man, standing upon a grassy hiltop, Unaware of the torture and hatered, so apparant, that took place all around him, Unaware of the treatment and condition of his fellow Man.. Woman.. and Child. I once saw a dream... A dream of a man, standing upon a grassy hilto...