Hi Tony,
Hmm! I particularly like the first stanza, which just goes to show you. I like the title too. I'd keep they can, myself, it has a good rhythm to my ear, and curiously, i read the last word as garbage.
Oh - and this:
Cheers,
John
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- Sat Apr 13, 2024 3:44 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Houses of the Holy
- Replies: 6
- Views: 284
- Fri Apr 12, 2024 5:50 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Black Nore Review
- Replies: 9
- Views: 201
Re: Black Nore Review
I agree, this is one of my faves of yours. And pelagic is a fine word.
Cheers,
John
Cheers,
John
- Thu Apr 11, 2024 6:42 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Black Nore Review
- Replies: 9
- Views: 201
Re: Black Nore Review
Hence the four dudes - I'm seeing double!
I may have finished off the champagne supply.
Cheers,
John
I may have finished off the champagne supply.
Cheers,
John
- Thu Apr 11, 2024 6:07 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Black Nore Review
- Replies: 9
- Views: 201
Re: Black Nore Review
That btw was champagne and some dude dancing four times. I don’t know why it wouldn’t post - another of life’s mysteries!
- Thu Apr 11, 2024 6:06 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Black Nore Review
- Replies: 9
- Views: 201
Re: Black Nore Review
What if I am?
- Thu Apr 11, 2024 4:58 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: Black Nore Review
- Replies: 9
- Views: 201
Re: Black Nore Review
Lovely vocabulary, Phil! I also very much like "Be a flightless god."
Cheers,
John
Cheers,
John
- Wed Apr 10, 2024 4:43 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3616
- Views: 362391
Re: The Chain
Very interesting! And Jack White learned a lot from Led Zep, of course. Here's another version:
- Wed Apr 10, 2024 4:39 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Constant Moon
- Replies: 4
- Views: 175
Re: The Constant Moon
It does indeed! And its downsides. I am generally up two or three times a night, and then by the early morning.
Cheers,
John
Cheers,
John
- Wed Apr 10, 2024 2:45 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Constant Moon
- Replies: 4
- Views: 175
Re: The Constant Moon
Hi Phil,
I'm glad you enjoyed the rider and the steppe! The Tien Shan mountains are just south of Almaty, they crop up as you wander round town. China is the other side. And I remember that rider, as I gazed out over the steppe from the night train between Almaty and Astana.
Cheers,
John
I'm glad you enjoyed the rider and the steppe! The Tien Shan mountains are just south of Almaty, they crop up as you wander round town. China is the other side. And I remember that rider, as I gazed out over the steppe from the night train between Almaty and Astana.
Cheers,
John
- Tue Apr 09, 2024 12:57 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: Favorite Songs
- Replies: 31
- Views: 704
Re: Favorite Songs
And this ...
And I suppose I should put in this one I was mentioning:
- Tue Apr 09, 2024 1:17 am
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: A poem that I read today by Mac
- Replies: 346
- Views: 65119
Re: A poem that I read today by Mac
The last line of this poem just came back to me:
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/ ... -innisfree
Cheers,
John
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/ ... -innisfree
Cheers,
John
- Mon Apr 08, 2024 11:45 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Constant Moon
- Replies: 4
- Views: 175
The Constant Moon
The Constant Moon Night comes into its kingdom. The blue gauze that hides the heavens from us has dissolved, and I can see the zodiac at work upon our destinies. The great machine turns through the quadrants as beneath its gaze, the town is sleeping. It is 2 a.m. Off to the East lies China now, beyo...
- Mon Apr 08, 2024 7:49 am
- Forum: Ezines, Magazines and Publications
- Topic: In The Ekphrastic Review
- Replies: 6
- Views: 166
Re: In The Ekphrastic Review
Thank you, Tristan, glad you enjoyed it!
Cheers,
John
Cheers,
John
- Mon Apr 08, 2024 3:22 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Ghost-Meat
- Replies: 5
- Views: 248
Re: Ghost-Meat
Hi Tony, I like the idea of this. There's a story that MIT hackers, back in the days when hacker meant something else, had a favorite Chinese restaurant whose menu in ideograms began to fascinate them - they wanted to decipher that code. So they came back with a Chinese-English dictionary and were a...
- Sun Apr 07, 2024 10:17 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3616
- Views: 362391
- Sun Apr 07, 2024 10:16 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Tinnitus
- Replies: 7
- Views: 196
Re: Tinnitus
I know what you mean. I used to jump from rooftop to rooftop, forty feet up, when I was ten. Glad not to be doing that now.
Cheers,
John
Cheers,
John
- Sun Apr 07, 2024 10:14 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Saturday Afternoon (version 2)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 191
Re: Saturday Afternoon (version 2)
Hi Caleb,
I like the update.
Cheers,
John
I like the update.
Cheers,
John
- Sun Apr 07, 2024 7:31 am
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: The Chain
- Replies: 3616
- Views: 362391
- Sun Apr 07, 2024 2:18 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Tinnitus
- Replies: 7
- Views: 196
- Sat Apr 06, 2024 9:10 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Even Better than the Real Thing
- Replies: 6
- Views: 195
Re: Even Better than the Real Thing
Thanks Phil! Yes, fashion is a funny thing, and art in its broadest sense is its primary home. The C20th certainly saw its share of fashions. Built-in obsolescence, really.
I like that favor-flavor detail! Unconscious, I think.
Cheers,
John
I like that favor-flavor detail! Unconscious, I think.
Cheers,
John
- Sat Apr 06, 2024 11:27 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Saturday Afternoon (version 2)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 191
Re: Saturday Afternoon
I like the title btw.
Cheers,
John
Cheers,
John
- Sat Apr 06, 2024 11:03 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Even Better than the Real Thing
- Replies: 6
- Views: 195
Re: Even Better than the Real Thing
Good night, Caleb! Sweet dreams!
Cheers,
John
Cheers,
John
- Sat Apr 06, 2024 11:02 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Saturday Afternoon (version 2)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 191
Re: Saturday Afternoon
Hi Caleb, I think you want to have shouted at the start of S2? I think this is very interesting introspection, but it spends some time not being a poem as I undertstand them. It's more like a chat at that point. If you want to try trimming, I think it might pop more? Experiments can be revelatory! C...
- Sat Apr 06, 2024 10:18 am
- Forum: Post Visual Art
- Topic: Untitled
- Replies: 8
- Views: 336
Re: Untitled
Thanks Caleb, it's an old poem, here because as you see, it cites this old Chinese fable. I'm glad you liked it. As you say, the fable has nothing to do with reality - one assumes no painted crab in fact scuttled off the wall back in the day. So, I'll quote Whistler instead, who sued Ruskin for libe...
- Sat Apr 06, 2024 9:35 am
- Forum: Post Visual Art
- Topic: Untitled
- Replies: 8
- Views: 336
Re: Untitled
There's a story about a famous Chinese painter summoned by the emperor to show his skill. So he is set up in a studio and given ten years, the emperor being a patient man. Ten years later, the emperor returns and asks if the painting's ready: there's a big wall with a curtain in front of it, presuma...