Poetry Forum

I enjoyed this, particually how brief yet descriptive the lines are, un-indulgent, especially when in comparison to the generally lofty visions of how summer affects people. It felt dismissive and cynical, that was great, like it was cutting people down before they deeply inhaled to reel off their r...

Take what a say lightly as I'm new to this. I won't comment further on the construction of your piece as it has been covered by the previous posts. One thing I would've liked personally is a reflection, in the language, of that time in the morning. Sleep deprivation has a strange effect on one’s tho...