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- Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:10 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Cultures
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1569
Re: Cultures
Sorry for the delay k-j, Geoff, Ros k-j I can use full moon as long as I don't get accused of being unimaginative. The eastern culture (s1) is a collage of: (a) the cormorant fishing - the cormorants have a collar and line and the collar prevents them from catching more than one fish at a time, (b) ...
- Fri Dec 02, 2011 2:36 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Of Owls and Apple Trees
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1935
Of Owls and Apple Trees
As my feathers are cloaked across my frame her claws knead a knot into my shoulder this dream I stole hides desires of forlorn man. Her acid nest, my pigment first feed on psilocybes around your feet marked as heat contours a table, in rings then take this wish as your command: A mammal of any size ...
- Thu Dec 01, 2011 9:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Five days to go
- Replies: 26
- Views: 5320
Re: Five days to go
Of Owls and Apple Trees moved to new thread
- Thu Dec 01, 2011 9:46 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Five days to go
- Replies: 26
- Views: 5320
Re: Five days to go
We are indeed.calico wrote: Me and John are going to post something aren't we John?
J.
- Mon Nov 28, 2011 10:08 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Cultures
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1569
Re: Cultures
Hi Blogsworth,
one problem with changing parts of S1 is that the two stanzas are blanced line by corresponding line. I'm not sure I want to change that.
However I can change the position of folded in L3 S1.
J.
one problem with changing parts of S1 is that the two stanzas are blanced line by corresponding line. I'm not sure I want to change that.
However I can change the position of folded in L3 S1.
J.
- Mon Nov 28, 2011 10:01 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Mists of Lyme
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2298
Re: The Mists of Lyme
Thank you Peter.
Re-assuring.
I still have to consider where I go with the rest of it.
At the moment I'm thinking of losing S3.
Thinking hurts....
J.
Re-assuring.
I still have to consider where I go with the rest of it.
At the moment I'm thinking of losing S3.
Thinking hurts....
J.
- Mon Nov 28, 2011 9:57 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Perspective (edited)
- Replies: 19
- Views: 2938
Re: Perspective (edited)
Just to let you know I like the revision,
balanced and tells the story
J.
balanced and tells the story
J.
- Mon Nov 28, 2011 4:32 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The Mists of Lyme
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2298
Re: The Mists of Lyme
Thanks E.
Do you have any names for me?
J.
Do you have any names for me?
J.
- Mon Nov 28, 2011 4:30 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Cultures
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1569
Re: Cultures
Hi Bloggsworth,
Thanks for the read.
And your suggestions, which I will study to see how they affect the balance.
J.
Thanks for the read.
And your suggestions, which I will study to see how they affect the balance.
J.
- Sun Nov 27, 2011 11:17 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Cultures
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1569
Cultures
On the night of the circular moon when cormorants raise fish one by one and folded fortune cookie red boats with lit candles set off towards the horizon where the sun will rise about six: The dreams of the pilgrims stay alive because each day’s tomorrow is when hopes will come true. On the night tha...
- Sun Nov 27, 2011 10:13 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: When I was Born
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3787
Re: When I was Born
Hi k-j
Thanks for the read.
I suppose I could do the cliched Crescent Moon? How about a geometric chord for anything up to a half-moon?
'Ballad of Reading Goal' - Oscar Wilde
not a typo - honest
Luke Skywalker - Stars Wars
Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief
Harry Potter
J.
Thanks for the read.
I suppose I could do the cliched Crescent Moon? How about a geometric chord for anything up to a half-moon?
'Ballad of Reading Goal' - Oscar Wilde
not a typo - honest
Luke Skywalker - Stars Wars
Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief
Harry Potter
J.
- Sun Nov 27, 2011 7:22 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: When I was Born
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3787
Re: When I was Born
Hi Geoff,
Oscar Wilde went to jail - goal. He wrote his poem 'Reading Goal'. Reading(town) reading (literature).
The association of that in transit refers to football-gaols-the Stadium: the obession of society to football as a game....
J.
Oscar Wilde went to jail - goal. He wrote his poem 'Reading Goal'. Reading(town) reading (literature).
The association of that in transit refers to football-gaols-the Stadium: the obession of society to football as a game....
J.
- Sun Nov 27, 2011 4:11 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Five days to go
- Replies: 26
- Views: 5320
Re: Five days to go
Why not?
Do you mean everyone has given up?
J.
Do you mean everyone has given up?
J.
- Sun Nov 27, 2011 4:06 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: The New Life
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3340
Re: The New Life
Hi k-j, like others here, I like this but it does need tidying up. Too many conjunctions. Some confusions: shop in shadows with bright lights, glad you changed your old existence but you don't say how. I felt the eggs, postal code etc were there for the rhyme. Little things like 'or eggs'; why not c...
- Sun Nov 27, 2011 3:45 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Manoeuvre
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1938
Re: Manoeuvre
I like this Megan - but not as much as k-j because I am not sure about the N going to her house and falling in; and who are Glen and Matthew Allen - should I know them? And why does the N tense up; isn't he happy?
J.
J.
- Sun Nov 27, 2011 3:34 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: When I was Born
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3787
Re: When I was Born
Thanks for your read, Megan. Man has been gifted (from the gods as it were) with literature and it is what we are doing with it, in a socio-intellectual context. Once children grew into ‘adult’ appreciation – earned their spurs so to speak; they had to be seen and not heard, they had ‘natural’ pursu...
- Thu Nov 24, 2011 10:14 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Beautiful Ball [V2]
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2546
Re: Beautiful Ball [V2]
Thanks Peter,
Work still to do then.
J.
Work still to do then.
J.
- Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:27 pm
- Forum: Poetry Discussion
- Topic: The list strategy and Google pattern matching
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2301
Re: The list strategy and Google pattern matching
You are right - a long post.
However, I can see the google * will come in useful for those elusive relationships.
Already I know I am the gravel in the shoe.
J.
However, I can see the google * will come in useful for those elusive relationships.
Already I know I am the gravel in the shoe.
J.
- Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:14 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: When I was Born
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3787
Re: When I was Born
Hi Peter.
Deliberate.
slivered = slice of moon.
New way of saying new moon. Well maybe not.
But then N is not of this world
I'll think about changing it but can't promise.
I also conclude that the macro view is an accident.
J.
Deliberate.
slivered = slice of moon.
New way of saying new moon. Well maybe not.
But then N is not of this world
I'll think about changing it but can't promise.
I also conclude that the macro view is an accident.
J.
- Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:51 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Samhain
- Replies: 2
- Views: 637
Re: Samhain
A sad and lonely voice, drifting across the evening breeze into the valleys.
A litany.
Musical.
J.
A litany.
Musical.
J.
- Thu Nov 24, 2011 12:40 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: When I was Born
- Replies: 12
- Views: 3787
When I was Born
I knew when I was born, In the year of the Scorpion, at half past three and four degrees left of a crescent moon; there would be controversy. No man is an Island, I was told as I floated in on the solar wind. ‘But what about a comet?’ I replied in bold bodoni font size ten as Ballad took my hand. No...
- Wed Nov 23, 2011 12:43 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Beautiful Ball [V2]
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2546
Re: Beautiful Ball [V2]
Tweaked,
Thanks Geoff.
J.
Thanks Geoff.
J.
- Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:05 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
- Topic: Coping
- Replies: 24
- Views: 5075
Re: Coping
Hi Ryan,
Sound advice from Ros,
Turns it into a nice poem:
And when we start all over, will Adam prove to be any the wiser?
J.
Sound advice from Ros,
Turns it into a nice poem:
And when we start all over, will Adam prove to be any the wiser?
J.
- Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:56 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Beautiful Ball [V2]
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2546
Re: Beautiful Ball [V2]
It must be transparent enough now, surely?
J.
J.
- Tue Nov 22, 2011 1:18 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Beautiful Ball [V2]
- Replies: 17
- Views: 2546
Re: Beautiful Ball [V2]
Being descriptive Ros,
Our callousness, how we wreck things without caring.
The irony that we sort out the oyster's problem of aggravating grit by killing it.
Pure and simple statement.
Obviously the wrong thing to do.
J.
Our callousness, how we wreck things without caring.
The irony that we sort out the oyster's problem of aggravating grit by killing it.
Pure and simple statement.
Obviously the wrong thing to do.
J.