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- Mon Aug 08, 2005 4:17 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Scan
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1336
Scan
I turn it over in my hands, the inky A4 printout of the ultrasound: is that a leg or an arm? I turn it upside down. Is that a jawbone or a jumping bean? I look at the spine, shaped like an interrobang, and then, I grope for the whole: a whorl of monochrome denoting an incoming storm, or a photo of J...
- Mon Aug 08, 2005 4:07 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: haiku
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1309
Morning. I hear what you're saying, virago. I think the 5-7-5 form can be divorced from the intentions of the traditional Japanese form - acting more like a structured epigram. After all, it's tough to replicate the intentions of the Japanese form when you don't have the immediacy of their ideograms.
- Sun Aug 07, 2005 9:05 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: haiku
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1309
haiku
Your clothes on the floor:
my unadulterated,
immediate bliss.
my unadulterated,
immediate bliss.
- Sun Aug 07, 2005 8:44 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Squatters
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2227
- Sun Aug 07, 2005 12:13 am
- Forum: Prose/Fiction Discussion
- Topic: 1984
- Replies: 31
- Views: 18333
- Sun Aug 07, 2005 12:11 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Bicycles
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1396
- Sat Aug 06, 2005 11:59 pm
- Forum: Prose/Fiction Discussion
- Topic: 1984
- Replies: 31
- Views: 18333
- Sat Aug 06, 2005 7:53 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Squatters
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2227
- Sat Aug 06, 2005 7:44 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Bicycles
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1396
- Sat Aug 06, 2005 3:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Why Bush REALLY invaded Iraq - Can you handle the truth?
- Replies: 16
- Views: 4337
- Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:52 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Squatters
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2227
- Fri Aug 05, 2005 11:36 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Just Desserts
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1444
Hi. The line breaks aren't working for me here. They seem to be arbitrary - if you take them out and concertina the thing into prose, I'm not sure what it loses. I don't expect a formal metric, or even the most subliminal beat, but these line breaks seem motiveless. So why not make it prose? - Conte...
- Fri Aug 05, 2005 8:31 pm
- Forum: Music and Song Lyric Discussion
- Topic: (sigh) Greatest Concept Album
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4163
- Fri Aug 05, 2005 8:12 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Squatters
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2227
Hello. I like the idea of thoughts as critters / rodents - frolicking around what, a Swiss-cheese mind? - do they really have delusions of grandeur, or are they just stubborn / impertinent? I think of people with delusions of grandeur as being showy, flashy, bombastic types - but your thoughts are s...
- Fri Aug 05, 2005 7:59 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Late One
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1932
- Fri Aug 05, 2005 2:23 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Late One
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1932
- Fri Aug 05, 2005 12:14 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Tripping
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2674
- Fri Aug 05, 2005 12:11 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Late One
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1932
Late One
Outside, the streetlights flicker into life. I draw the aluminium blinds and face my desk, and notice that my office is grotesque: entirely so, much more so than before. I shift uncomfortably in my seat. My neck grows thick within the collar of my shirt. I set my telephone to call divert and in my d...
- Thu Aug 04, 2005 11:39 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Tripping
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2674
- Thu Aug 04, 2005 11:27 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: A New Street Soul
- Replies: 15
- Views: 3322
- Thu Aug 04, 2005 11:18 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: England's Green and Pleasant
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1731
- Thu Aug 04, 2005 10:55 pm
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Evening Mourning
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1502