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Yello
Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 2:48 pm
by jeremyyoung
Lapsed poet, in the wild and windy north, returning to the fold.
Re: Yello
Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 3:01 pm
by brianedwards
Hello and welcome.
Rules round here request you critique 2 poems to every 1 you post, so please get stuck in. I'd post a link to the guidelines but I'm on my phone and it's a pain in the arse. I'm sure someone will point you in that direction in due course.
Happy poeming.
B.
Re: Yello
Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2014 10:03 pm
by jeremyyoung
Thank you.
Re: Yello
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 6:40 pm
by Antcliff
Hello, Jeremy...welcome to PG. Welcome aboard.
viewtopic.php?f=25&t=3497
Re: Yello
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 8:23 pm
by David
Hi Jeremy. I seem to see that you've had a slightly rough baptism so far, but don't let that put you off. We're all (ahem, mostly) sweeties really.
Cheers
David
Re: Yello
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 11:28 pm
by brianedwards
I retract my welcome.
B.