Hello everyone,
I'm about to graduate from university and head into the big bad world. I'll be posting a wide range of poems that deal with a wide range of subjects, I like criticism of my work, but it is what it is.
I hope you're all well, I look forward to reading your work.
Peace and Love,
Ben
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I see you've already posted 2 poems. We encourage people to read other poetry on the site and post crits of what they see, generally at least 2 crits for each of your poems. One of the best ways to learn is to work out what works and what doesn't in others' work.BenRhodes wrote:Hello everyone,
I'm about to graduate from university and head into the big bad world./quote]
Congratulations, and welcome to PG!
Not sure what you mean by that. Obviously you take what you want from crits, but if you're not thinking of addressing the points made at all, you may be missing the point of posting...BenRhodes wrote: I'll be posting a wide range of poems that deal with a wide range of subjects, I like criticism of my work, but it is what it is.
Ros
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