Hello as u can see Im from Glasgaow, Im new here so just introducing myself.
I dont write poetry but I have some poetry written by my "Late Father" and wondered if it was ok to post it and let people read it ,
would that be ok ?
glesgajohn
new here have some poetry for reading if interested
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Hello. I DO NOT write poetry, the poetry I post is my LATE FATHERS not mine ,
just posting it for opinions.
thanks
glesgajohn
just posting it for opinions.
thanks
glesgajohn
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Hi David thanks for your reply. I know critique can be good or bad , but I dont mind either way (lets me know if it,s good or not ) I wont be upset by any critique , it was just to let people read it to see what they think.David wrote:Hi John. I have no problem with that, if you're sure you want to do it. Comments aren't always complimentary, you see, which you might find upsetting. (I think I would in your position.)
Cheers
David
I also just wanted to give him the credit for his work .
thanks again
glesgajohn
Hello. I DO NOT write poetry, the poetry I post is my LATE FATHERS not mine ,
just posting it for opinions.
thanks
glesgajohn
just posting it for opinions.
thanks
glesgajohn
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@ David.
so you don't mind if i post some ?
thanks
so you don't mind if i post some ?
thanks
Hello. I DO NOT write poetry, the poetry I post is my LATE FATHERS not mine ,
just posting it for opinions.
thanks
glesgajohn
just posting it for opinions.
thanks
glesgajohn
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Greetings, John
This is a poetry workshop not a showroom, so it is hard to see what purpose there would be in posting any poems if IN ADVANCE it was said that no comment would lead to any change in the text. All that will happen is that you will post the poems and the post will gradually pass down the list until it slips from view. I can understand the urge to want to share the poems. Very much so. But this really isn't the place, John. Honest.
Best wishes,
Seth
This is a poetry workshop not a showroom, so it is hard to see what purpose there would be in posting any poems if IN ADVANCE it was said that no comment would lead to any change in the text. All that will happen is that you will post the poems and the post will gradually pass down the list until it slips from view. I can understand the urge to want to share the poems. Very much so. But this really isn't the place, John. Honest.
Best wishes,
Seth
We fray into the future, rarely wrought
Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
Richard Wilbur
Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
Richard Wilbur
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ok Antcliff , I will post a short one ( just one ) thanks anywayAntcliff wrote:Greetings, John
This is a poetry workshop not a showroom, so it is hard to see what purpose there would be in posting any poems if IN ADVANCE it was said that no comment would lead to any change in the text. All that will happen is that you will post the poems and the post will gradually pass down the list until it slips from view. I can understand the urge to want to share the poems. Very much so. But this really isn't the place, John. Honest.
Best wishes,
Seth
cheers
Hello. I DO NOT write poetry, the poetry I post is my LATE FATHERS not mine ,
just posting it for opinions.
thanks
glesgajohn
just posting it for opinions.
thanks
glesgajohn