Kipling or De La Mare?
Here we go on the final stretch!
Cheers,
John
The Way through the Woods, Rudyard Kipling
They shut the road through the woods
Seventy years ago.
Weather and rain have undone it again,
And now you would never know
There was once a road through the woods
Before they planted the trees.
It is underneath the coppice and heath,
And the thin anemones.
Only the keeper sees
That, where the ring-dove broods,
And the badgers roll at ease,
There was once a road through the woods.
Yet, if you enter the woods
Of a summer evening late,
When the night-air cools on the trout-ringed pools
Where the otter whistles his mate,
(They fear not men in the woods,
Because they see so few.)
You will hear the beat of a horse’s feet,
And the swish of a skirt in the dew,
Steadily cantering through
The misty solitudes,
As though they perfectly knew
The old lost road through the woods.
But there is no road through the woods.
The Listeners, BY WALTER DE LA MARE: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/ ... -listeners
Cheers,
John
The Way through the Woods, Rudyard Kipling
They shut the road through the woods
Seventy years ago.
Weather and rain have undone it again,
And now you would never know
There was once a road through the woods
Before they planted the trees.
It is underneath the coppice and heath,
And the thin anemones.
Only the keeper sees
That, where the ring-dove broods,
And the badgers roll at ease,
There was once a road through the woods.
Yet, if you enter the woods
Of a summer evening late,
When the night-air cools on the trout-ringed pools
Where the otter whistles his mate,
(They fear not men in the woods,
Because they see so few.)
You will hear the beat of a horse’s feet,
And the swish of a skirt in the dew,
Steadily cantering through
The misty solitudes,
As though they perfectly knew
The old lost road through the woods.
But there is no road through the woods.
The Listeners, BY WALTER DE LA MARE: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/ ... -listeners
Last edited by jisbell00 on Sun Jun 11, 2023 6:48 am, edited 2 times in total.
Edward Thomas is great! There is a shared vocabulary there, i think, though Kipling often yells, it seems to me, and Thomas less so. This is a less yelly Kipling poem.
This was fun to do. Next up would likely have been Browning and Tennyson, but interest seems to be tailing off!
Cheers,
John
This was fun to do. Next up would likely have been Browning and Tennyson, but interest seems to be tailing off!
Cheers,
John
Appreciated John. I like to think a while over stuff. Your comment on Donne's flippancy, or rather his being trapped by the flippant style of his early work, has given me another perspective on his later poems I hadn't considered.
Bw
Phil
Bw
Phil
Ooh, hard to choose! The poems have similar merits, we think. I do remember Gran Teague reading 'The Listeners' to me when I was very young (she died in 1985), so perhaps that poem edges it due to the connection. But the Kipling is a good read too, not least for the details of various animals, such as the ring-dove (^v^)
Cheerie,
F & (^v^)
Cheerie,
F & (^v^)
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I wasn't looking on the site for a couple days, so I didn't see this. That de la Mare poem is one of my all-time favorite poems. It has special meaning to me because the book that poem appeared in was the first poetry book I ever owned. I was an adolescent then. That poem helped me to see how words could be made into art. But I was also a sophisticated enough reader back then to see how the uneven lines made the poem a little awkward.
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