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Sun Jun 19, 2016 2:52 pm

Hmm. And what do I send to those for whom the real message is: 'Please don't inflict this on anyone else, either'.

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Sun Jun 19, 2016 3:32 pm

Hi Ros,

Laughs aside, I'd always assumed that these words were normally part of a form response, and as such had the possibility of being euphemistic.

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Sun Jun 19, 2016 5:04 pm

ha! Euphemism indeed.
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Sun Jun 19, 2016 6:42 pm

I like the line break on 'your', which hangs there allowing any number of options to follow, such as 'crap', before you read on to the next line. It also suggests that the writer of these words may have paused here and decided to use a more complementary word than the one they initially thought of.

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Mon Jun 27, 2016 6:55 pm

Firebird wrote:Great T-Shirt
Got a smile out of me, Tristan. I could still fill in the missing word with an expletive or two. The line break is great. :D

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Tue Jun 28, 2016 9:32 am

JJ, glad you enjoyed it.

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