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Hmm. And what do I send to those for whom the real message is: 'Please don't inflict this on anyone else, either'.
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Rosencrantz: What are you playing at? Guildenstern: Words. Words. They're all we have to go on.
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I like the line break on 'your', which hangs there allowing any number of options to follow, such as 'crap', before you read on to the next line. It also suggests that the writer of these words may have paused here and decided to use a more complementary word than the one they initially thought of.
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Tristan
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Tristan
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Got a smile out of me, Tristan. I could still fill in the missing word with an expletive or two. The line break is great.Firebird wrote:Great T-Shirt
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