my me my kid

New to poetry? Unsure about the quality of your work? Then why not post here to receive some gentle feedback.
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Lovely
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Sat Aug 07, 2010 12:52 am

You will create a devil in me ........what?

Brothers in arms? What in harm? I am tired....................

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Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:05 am

Haha...is this a poem or just saying you love us?
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Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:23 am

Not sure what to make of this at all Dave. You submitting this as a poem?

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