Dawning

[arunansu]

I plunged down
the depths of quietude,
you relished the way
the mirror crashed to the floor.

That day I could discern
craters of ivory moon.

I'm no longer the poet
who'd fumble with words;
the mist has cleared

And each bend in the path
guides me towards brightness.

[Danté]

Aru, I liked the optimism of this piece and found it rather poignant without fully understanding why.

The word placements are making this read very well.

thanks

Tim

[arunansu]

Thank you Tim for your comments and time. Smiles.

[Cryptic Cadence]

Well written as always, though I'm not quite sure I understand it, but I would like to know the meaning behind it. I particularly like "That day I could discern craters of ivory moon".

I think it has a great ending too, is that supposed to represent difficulties in life guiding people to make better choices?