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[Suzanne]

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one
slow
roll
on
hollow
cheek






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[Macavity]

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Like the title, perhaps some visual play to convey a sense of movement.

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[KevJ]

This is short and sweet from you Suzanne. I like that sense of movement.

[Suzanne]

Thank you. I found this in my files from a few years ago.
Thought i'd share it. I'm not too keen on the roll of roll but appreciate the idea.

I used to enjoy writing the short ones. Thanks for the encouragement.
Suzanne

[Nunkadesu]

I didn't understand the concept. Should i be thinking in a certain way for some understanding to dawn on me?

[Suzanne]

Naw. If you didn't get the concept and you are waiting for understanding to dawn on you, just give it up.
No point. There is nothing there. Thanks. Suzanne

[Jackie]

Hi Suzanne, You say you used to enjoy writing the short ones. I've spent a lot of time on them, too. What do you think about it now? I'm trying to build those single images into more complex, multi-celled animals but I'm not sure if there is a reason that everything has to go that way.

Jackie

[David Smedley]

Hiya Suzanne, I enjoyed this, it captured something that made me ponder the why of the tear.....David

[TonyMac]

I assumed this was about a tear moving down the face. With that in mind, I rather liked the way it was expressed.