When winter petal walks
some say "sweet spring!"
Under gentle rain and gorgeous misty moon
a girl is aching like a luscious bruise, drained of all beauty.
When the evening is dry and raw,
she shakes, then falls, a sad women
with a white wet bouquet of skin,
parting like delicate lace.
woman work the water
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Hi pg
Welcome aboard.
This is rather fine and should really be posted in "experienced". It reads like a translation of Japanese/Chinese poetry: sparse, zen-like, haunting.
Nice one.
Look forward to seeing more of your stuff.
Cheers
Cam
Welcome aboard.
This is rather fine and should really be posted in "experienced". It reads like a translation of Japanese/Chinese poetry: sparse, zen-like, haunting.
Nice one.
Look forward to seeing more of your stuff.
Cheers
Cam
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really haunting and beautifull
'luscious bruise' - what an amazing image
loved it lots
benjy
'luscious bruise' - what an amazing image
loved it lots
benjy