A midsummer nights

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scotsman
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Tue Jan 15, 2008 4:02 pm

I’ve seen golden sunrises
And butterfly dances
I’ve seen fairies and nymphs
With bright coloured wings
Watched fireflies light up the skies
I’ve seen goblins and elves
And giant bluebells
I’ve been where the queen
Of fairies dwells
Titania and Oberon the king of the elves
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Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:34 pm

We ask for 2 pieces of critique for each poem posted scotsman. That's openly stated in the posting guidelines.

You will not receive any comments until then.

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barrie
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Tue Jan 15, 2008 5:35 pm

Welcome to the forum, but please check the rules.

viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2605

You are required to comment on at least two other poems for each poem you post. This is how the forum keeps going - the more you put in, the more you get back (hopefully).

cheers

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After letting go of branches and walking through the ape gait, we managed to grasp what hands were really for......
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Beaten by a minute!
After letting go of branches and walking through the ape gait, we managed to grasp what hands were really for......
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