Peacock

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Kilravluis
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Sun Jan 20, 2008 11:25 pm

There once was a peacock called dove(s),
with himself he was madly in love,
when told he was crummy
he spat out his dummy,
he believed he was blessed from above.
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Sun Jan 20, 2008 11:47 pm

??????
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 12:18 am

o kivraluis,
i love you.
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 1:08 am

There once was a peacock called dove(s),
with himself he was madly in love,

doves wrote:o kivraluis,
i love you.
Does this mean that you are really Kilravluis?
After letting go of branches and walking through the ape gait, we managed to grasp what hands were really for......
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 1:09 am

AWwww..Kilravluis..somebody loves you!
"Freedom is what you do with what's been done to you."
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Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:57 am

juliadebeauvoir wrote:AWwww..Kilravluis..somebody loves you!
Yes, but after reading his apology added to Woodcutter, only after he's had too much wine. In vino veritas - I don't believe it.

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