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Here is the rewrite:
Chanteuse…
Swivelling…stiletto…provocative pirouettes…lusty busty…lust…thirty…year…long night…filling voids…raincoats and overcoats…tattooed mermaids…neon neighbourhood…pink and blue milieu…touched…touched…touched by many…not cherished…save one…only one…soul for sale…extraordinary spirit...going...going...gone...cheap…consummation…take me…take me…have me…for a paper exchange…now…was it good?...did I please you?...Oh my…Oh yes…Oh no…gone…gone...forever...no…can’t be.. Chantelle…Chanteuse…will we ever……Again!
ORIGINAL VERSION
Chanteuse
Swivelling on a stiletto
in pirouettes of lust,
her life was a thirty-year night.
Filling voids for vampires,
vultures and vagabonds
in a vivid-violet purlieus.
Touched by many
cherished by one,
a soul-selling extraordinaire.
Consummation complete
with a paper exchange.
Chantelle, will we ever meet
- Again?