Must try harder, Tim,
you little skiver, or I'll
kick you in thr crutch
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Haiku Train
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twoleftfeet
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Gene van Troyer
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For an ice-cold beer
I mose certainly do rave—
Pause for Burma Shave...
I mose certainly do rave—
Pause for Burma Shave...
"If you don't like my principles, I have others." —Groucho Marx
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twoleftfeet
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Of your cry "Got change?,
I remained oblivious:
All misers are deaf
I remained oblivious:
All misers are deaf
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kozmikdave
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All misers are deaf -
functionally deaf and blind
to all the world's needs.
functionally deaf and blind
to all the world's needs.
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kozmikdave
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and some rolling stones
in moss gathering season
leave empty handed
in moss gathering season
leave empty handed
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kozmikdave
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burnt, wet sausage - mmmmmm
deck chair filling with rain - hmmmmm
damp book pages - grrrrrrrrrr
deck chair filling with rain - hmmmmm
damp book pages - grrrrrrrrrr
Hiding at the mo
In a cupboard roofed with stairs
listening for the footsteps
In a cupboard roofed with stairs
listening for the footsteps
Criticism - The art of judging with knowledge and propriety of the beauties and faults of a literary performance. Ha ..Well I'm definitely gonna fall short there....However rules is rules.
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"As a general rule, people, even the wicked, are much more naïve and simple hearted then we may suppose. And we ourselves are, too."
[center]~Dostoevsky[/center]
[center]~Dostoevsky[/center]
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oranggunung
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This train appears to have become derailed.
The 5-7-5 format of the haiku is the only real rule of the train, so I’ll jump back to the last legitimate ‘carriage’, and carry on from there.
Hope that’s okay with you all.
Hiding at the mo
Alert for hunters’ footsteps
Sensing only fear
The 5-7-5 format of the haiku is the only real rule of the train, so I’ll jump back to the last legitimate ‘carriage’, and carry on from there.
Hope that’s okay with you all.
Hiding at the mo
Alert for hunters’ footsteps
Sensing only fear
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Bombadil
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Sensing only fear
and musky adrenaline
I tense for the strike.
and musky adrenaline
I tense for the strike.
I only ever had but one prayer to God, that was: "O, Lord, make my enemies ridiculous." And he granted it.--Voltaire