Almost A Pavement Cafe (OCTOBER FEATURE)

New to poetry? Unsure about the quality of your work? Then why not post here to receive some gentle feedback.
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mesmie
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Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:03 pm

yes

congrats..
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Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:16 pm

I never looked i on this first time round..... my loss....

Congratulations el wow....very well deserved... 8)

Nice one....very nice one.
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Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:55 pm

Well done El Wow,

A very deserved feature, congratulations on creating such a widely enjoyed poetic picture.

Keep em coming

all the best

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to anticipate touching what is unseen seems far more interesting than seeing what the hand can not touch
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Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:21 pm

Very well done, this is a great read and very deserving of Octobers feature :P
Keep posting,
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Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:22 pm

thanks very much merlin, glad you liked

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Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:23 pm

Danté wrote:Well done El Wow,

A very deserved feature, congratulations on creating such a widely enjoyed poetic picture.

Keep em coming

all the best

Danté
ta for the neat response dante

El
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Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:24 pm

Raisin wrote:Very well done, this is a great read and very deserving of Octobers feature :P
Keep posting,
Raisin
kindly reply raisin thanks

El
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