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arunansu
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Wed Nov 12, 2008 3:10 pm

I'm climbing up
the Roaches, sans belayer,
towed by hope.


( A Senryu Poem)

Follow the links
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Roaches
and
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Belay
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Wed Nov 12, 2008 5:54 pm

Exciting and scary! towed by hope, excellent line.
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Wed Nov 12, 2008 7:30 pm

Nice one Aru

The links are really useful and once again, you have shown how small can be big in respect of poetry.
I agree with Suzanne, great closing line.

Thank you

Tim
to anticipate touching what is unseen seems far more interesting than seeing what the hand can not touch
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Wed Nov 12, 2008 8:16 pm

Nice one Arun - I can't get into this type of poetry at all - but do enjoy reading pieces...

No crits....

Nice one...
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Thu Nov 13, 2008 8:13 am

Glad that you people liked it.
Cheers.
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