i loved her,
she talked and talked and talked,
i didn't love her,
she walked and walked and walked,,
i miss her,
her talk, her walk, her socks.
a quickie
This was a fun poem! Pop some capitals into the I's and remove that double comma typo in line four, but otherwise it is good - personally I enjoyed the ending with missing her socks simply due to the randomness of it!
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Oh! very, very nice little ditty.
To miss someone's socks, that is true missing.
I think that last line could say her talks, her walks and her socks.
My preference.
Nice,
Suzanne
To miss someone's socks, that is true missing.
I think that last line could say her talks, her walks and her socks.
My preference.
Nice,
Suzanne
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Socks are very personal and quite asexual. works for me.
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great smashing super!
Cute write. Nothing more to add. Enjoyed.