Misprnits (Rvesied)

[jms]

Revised

If, the
'Cat let out, for only £5'
is a new pub service,
and Orioginal is a previously unknown
Japanese art;
Reviosion must be a brand new game,
a variation on Reversi, no doubt?

Original

If, the
'Cat let out, for only £5'
is a new pub service,
and Orioginal is a previously unknown
Japanese art;
Reviosion must be a brand new game,
a variation on Reversi, no doubt,
and that
is that.

[arunansu]

Interesting 'misprnits' here, JMS! Enjoyed the whole, very clever write.

[mesmie]

Well observed Made me laugh..a good thing!!

Think you could dis the 'and that is that' bit.


mes

[jms]

Thanks both! I'll give some more thought to the last couple of lines, as I wasn't sure either.

Cheers,

Jon

[karalma]

This made me smile. I agree it doesn't need the last 2 lines - they don't quite sound right.

[jms]

Cheers! That's a majority vote then, I've altered accordingly.