metal rods
of a wind chime
grumble
about an unruly wind
that troubles their inertia
an unfastened door
curses the stubborn breeze,
wails …
yet prayer wheels turn
with such airstreams
Peace
This is my cup of tea sir. Really nice to read this. Great.
You have put the meaning of PEACE over very well indeed it behoves such a poet to do so. This is a treasure for me then, one I will always
love deeply.
Fantastic. I have written some pieces myself on this Peace and---Power----I hope to put them on in the future, maybe. You have stolen
peace for yourself, this makes you one MATURE POET, sir. As good as it gets...Needs to be FEATURED this....I think at times we all forget
that Real Power is PEACE. Peace is not a piece of paper to appease tyrants who have No peace (in a world) which beggars for peace.
YOU HAVE COME TO LIGHT THEN, A TRUE ARTIST YOU. And, oh yes, peace is found WITHIN. You have just done us all a blessing perhaps
without knowing. Peace is real power the only power really worth having; it is also beauty something we all search for, even if we have never thought
about the true meaning of peace, which you express so adeptly here.
You are a poet-seer-- very rare these days indeed.
D J Lovely.
You have put the meaning of PEACE over very well indeed it behoves such a poet to do so. This is a treasure for me then, one I will always
love deeply.
Fantastic. I have written some pieces myself on this Peace and---Power----I hope to put them on in the future, maybe. You have stolen
peace for yourself, this makes you one MATURE POET, sir. As good as it gets...Needs to be FEATURED this....I think at times we all forget
that Real Power is PEACE. Peace is not a piece of paper to appease tyrants who have No peace (in a world) which beggars for peace.
YOU HAVE COME TO LIGHT THEN, A TRUE ARTIST YOU. And, oh yes, peace is found WITHIN. You have just done us all a blessing perhaps
without knowing. Peace is real power the only power really worth having; it is also beauty something we all search for, even if we have never thought
about the true meaning of peace, which you express so adeptly here.
You are a poet-seer-- very rare these days indeed.
D J Lovely.
Is not life strange, eh? This being a masterpiece with to few comments, eh?
It makes it even better then.......love it even more now if that is possible!
It is as if no one wants to read it -----------but why? Are they scared of themselves?
Rock on sir, I love you lots and always.
DJL
It makes it even better then.......love it even more now if that is possible!
It is as if no one wants to read it -----------but why? Are they scared of themselves?
Rock on sir, I love you lots and always.
DJL
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Nice write, I love wind poems.
You really can throw up some great images.
Well done
BinB.
You really can throw up some great images.
Well done
BinB.
Poems everybody...poems.. the laddie fancies himself a poet!..Pink Floyd-The wall.
Thank you all for the replies.
Thank you Jazziwoz. And thank you Lovely for being so encouraging.