Saxophone wails

[arunansu]

Edit:

moonlight
pours over barrel cactus
beside windowsill :

I ride down the waves
on a surfboard
in California waters


Original :
moonlight
pours over barrel cactus
beside windowsill :
silvery rectangles
on floorboard

I ride down the waves
on a surfboard
in California waters

[Jasper]

Ermmmmm... wouldn't New Orleans be more fluid towards the saxophonic blues here, A. California?????
Am I also seeing a tequila sunrise on the window sill. or what?

Strange mash this!

J

[jazziwoz]

I thought the imagery was very suiting to a saxaphone especially the bit about the waves - felt there was a lot more that could have been said - good start!

[arunansu]

Thanks Jasper and Jazziwoz for your thoughts on this.
Thanks.

[Suzanne]

Ah! Fun!
What a nice twist from India. Nice images., a cactus and a surfer Dude.
What a treat, thanks.
Suzanne