end waste.

[Leigh]

Either you have someone else, you think I need discipline like an unruly dog or you are just being a bitch.



I believe you are trying to force me out of love with you. everything is a construct

[David]

Well, it is what it is, I suppose, but is it a poem?

[Leigh]

maybe its part of a poem. I think its easy to imagine the rest.

[kattie]

I understand your topic but I think it lacks the structure of a poem.

[Lovely]

I think David is right. Is it a poem?



Best Wishes.

DJL

[arunansu]

I do feel this IS a poem, Leigh. A prose poem. And a good one.Smiles.

[ray miller]

I think it's the bones of a poem howling at the finger that is pointing at the moon.

[Suzanne]

I enjoy your contributions to the site. They are fresh and cause a bit of pondering. I liked it.
You are very much alive, Leigh, it shows in your writing.

thanks,
Suzanne