Meditative thought and lore
Report what all the fret is for
should not, our limber hearts absorb?
come score and score of manticore
Yet so, shall we keep undertow
that save ourselves in overgrowth
All words I keep in pride
with mourning comes a longing sigh
O rye of man, can swim and fly
But everything to live must die
rye of man
Welcome to the forum.
While we encourage new members to dive right in, we also expect them to read and adhere to our rules.
You are expected to critique at least two poems before submitting your own.
Constructively,
Travis
While we encourage new members to dive right in, we also expect them to read and adhere to our rules.
You are expected to critique at least two poems before submitting your own.
Constructively,
Travis
There's only one rule in street and bar fights: maximum violence, instantly. (Martin Amis, "Money")
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Susan-Morris3
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Hiya and welcome, Only been here a week myself so only just finding my way about, just click on a couple of poems and say what you feel about them. and people will do you the same favour.
In my case everyone has been surprisingly helpful, given honest opinions and sound advice, far more than i could give back. I'm genuinely extremely grateful for all there wise words. I don't have the experience to do the same for my poetry pals, but I am learning fast and can at least say if I like there work ....or not as the case maybe.
enjoyed the read will digest your poem and reply more fully latter.
In my case everyone has been surprisingly helpful, given honest opinions and sound advice, far more than i could give back. I'm genuinely extremely grateful for all there wise words. I don't have the experience to do the same for my poetry pals, but I am learning fast and can at least say if I like there work ....or not as the case maybe.
enjoyed the read will digest your poem and reply more fully latter.