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unsettled by breeze
a new year
sparrows engaged
in what-if analysis
Endymion
looks out for Cynthia
between clouds
i open my window
a sparrow escapes
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Of roving thoughts, and a bit of Keats
Thank you Ian for the reply and time.
Thanks for visiting, Mbc. "Endymion" is a poem written by John Keats (panned by critics too). You can find it here: http://www.john-keats.com/
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As often happens with your work, aru, I didn't quite connect with any meaning you might have intended, but I liked the sound of it - I particularly like the image in the first 2 lines.
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Thank you Lovely, Mbc, David. Sorry Arian, that this didn't work for you.
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I agree. You're extremely good at recording things - everyday occurrences - in haiku-style verse. There's always a dash of colour or scent or something to grab onto, and you're so good at describing movement. And I can compliment you as much as I like because I know you'll just carry on doing what you do.Lovely wrote:That is brilliant Aru!
You don't know how good You are... do you?
fine words butter no parsnips
Thanks K-j for the appreciation of the piece. I invite you to visit my new blogsite :
www.arunansub.blogspot.com
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