Painting by numbers
Wow! I never heard painting by the numbers explained as well as this:
"reckoning nature
is a sum of parts"
that is brilliant.
Good stuff.
"reckoning nature
is a sum of parts"
that is brilliant.
Good stuff.
"Poetry's unnat'ral; no man ever talked poetry 'cept a beadle on boxin' day, or Warren's blackin' or Rowland's oil, or some o' them low fellows; never you let yourself down to talk poetry, my boy." C. Dickens
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BenJohnson
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Long over due a comment on this, congratulations on the October highlight. You have come a long way from joining this forum for the anagram poems and certainly rank as a poet in your own right. After the recent discussion you have captured this very well here.
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terriblefish
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Beautiful. I loved every word, every image, every beat.
And I loved the spin on numbers and the universe. It conjured thoughts of Fibonacci, and the flawless,perfectly numerical systems we see replicated in nature all the time.
Bravo, encore.
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And I loved the spin on numbers and the universe. It conjured thoughts of Fibonacci, and the flawless,perfectly numerical systems we see replicated in nature all the time.
Bravo, encore.
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Hello Neil,
I liked this very much. The simplicity is inviting but also idea of the whole being a sum of the parts can be so universally understood.
Yes, I concur, you have bloomed since you arrived. And I am glad you found PG. You are a wonderful addition to the mix of styles and creativity.
Very well put together.
Suzanne
I liked this very much. The simplicity is inviting but also idea of the whole being a sum of the parts can be so universally understood.
Yes, I concur, you have bloomed since you arrived. And I am glad you found PG. You are a wonderful addition to the mix of styles and creativity.
Very well put together.
Suzanne