Beautiful Me (revised)

New to poetry? Unsure about the quality of your work? Then why not post here to receive some gentle feedback.
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JJWilliamson
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Fri Apr 03, 2015 1:27 pm

Thanks, Katherine

I think we all do. This self-delusional individual is out there somewhere.

Pleased it put a smile on your face and your review is more than welcome

JJ
Katherine wrote:I know this person very well!
Very funny JJ!

Not much of a critique, I realise. But, I know what I like and I like this. :D
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Fri Apr 03, 2015 10:09 pm

Thought I'd just drop by and say that I too prefer the original.

Thank for a good read.

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Sat Apr 04, 2015 9:10 pm

Thanks Firebird

Thanks for dropping by, I will certainly take your preference into account during further revisions.
Pleased you enjoyed the read.

Best

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Firebird wrote:Thought I'd just drop by and say that I too prefer the original.

Thank for a good read.

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