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Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 8:51 am
by twoleftfeet
Must try harder, Tim,
you little skiver, or I'll
kick you in thr crutch
.
.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 9:14 pm
by davelord
kick you in thr crutch
I also confused my arse
with my ears. Oh bum

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2008 10:05 pm
by Travis
With my ears, oh bum,
did I hear the poverty
of your cry - "got change?"

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:50 am
by Gene van Troyer
For an ice-cold beer
I mose certainly do rave—
Pause for Burma Shave...

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 2:37 am
by Travis
Pause for Burma Shave
and for Gene van Troyer, for
he broke the rules here...

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 9:22 am
by twoleftfeet
Of your cry "Got change?,
I remained oblivious:
All misers are deaf

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 12:23 pm
by kozmikdave
All misers are deaf -
functionally deaf and blind
to all the world's needs.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 7:02 pm
by TDF
to all the world's needs
I am aware but ignore
sympathy devil

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 1:34 am
by Travis
Sympathy Devil...
Sympathy FOR THE Devil!
Guys, I got a song!

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 5:31 pm
by TDF
Guys, I got a song!
all we need is a big mouth
and some rolling stones

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Wed May 07, 2008 11:43 am
by kozmikdave
and some rolling stones
in moss gathering season
leave empty handed

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 8:27 pm
by Lake
Leave empty handed
Come back satisfied minded
Grey clouds fly away

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 10:09 pm
by TDF
grey clouds fly away
likely return tomorrow
bloody English spring

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 11:39 pm
by Lake
bloody English spring
cheered by an English muffin
time for barbecue

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 4:00 pm
by TDF
time for barbecue
Charred sausages and burgers.
it's starting to rain.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 6:21 am
by Travis
It's starting to rain.
Why don't you go inside then?
But I like the rain...

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat May 10, 2008 11:58 am
by TDF
But I like the rain
so cooking will persevere
burnt, wet sausage - mmmmmm

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 10:59 am
by kozmikdave
burnt, wet sausage - mmmmmm
deck chair filling with rain - hmmmmm
damp book pages - grrrrrrrrrr

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 8:17 am
by thoke
Damp book pages - grrrrrrrrrr
- tear easily - roooooooaaaaarr. Are
you feeling all right?!

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 8:24 am
by Elphin
You feeling all right?
No - my heart is broke in two.
Half of me is left.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Tue May 13, 2008 5:36 pm
by TDF
Half of me is left.
though no clue where the rest is
hiding at the mo.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 4:11 pm
by wabbit
Hiding at the mo
In a cupboard roofed with stairs
listening for the footsteps

Posted: Sat May 17, 2008 6:49 pm
by Milu
*edited*

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 4:37 pm
by oranggunung
This train appears to have become derailed.

The 5-7-5 format of the haiku is the only real rule of the train, so I’ll jump back to the last legitimate ‘carriage’, and carry on from there.

Hope that’s okay with you all.


Hiding at the mo
Alert for hunters’ footsteps
Sensing only fear

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 6:23 pm
by Bombadil
Sensing only fear
and musky adrenaline
I tense for the strike.