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Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:30 am
by oranggunung
And resting, the night
spread it arms across the sky,
scattering stardust.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 5:33 pm
by Raisin
Scattering stardust.
A dust storm of gold and fire,
spreads inky blushes.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:06 pm
by Suzanne
"Spreads" Inky blushes
every time a stranger asks,
"It's a nickname, right?"
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:46 pm
by barrie
"It's a nickname, right?"
"No, it's not," replied Jack Shit,
"You don't know nothing!"
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:49 pm
by juliadebeauvoir
"You don't know nothing!"
is a double negative.
Check your grammar, please.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 6:16 pm
by oranggunung
Check your grammar, please,
before you stick your clause in,
cruciverbalist.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 6:44 pm
by barrie
Cruciverbalist?
I just can't get one across:
it's time to go down.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 7:00 pm
by Mickpjb
It's time to go down
and jump on the Haiku train,
next stop nobody knows.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:23 pm
by Raisin
Next stop, nobody knows.
So pick up your newspaper
and count all your toes.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:39 pm
by oranggunung
“And count all your toes.
Those rats are hungry buggers;
they don’t need askin’!”
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:19 pm
by Raisin
They don't need askin'!
When fed on toxic waste, and
peeled banana skins.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 9:47 am
by barrie
Peeled banana skins?
Who would peel banana skins?
And who peels the peel?
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 4:10 pm
by Danté
And who peels the peel?
Some surreal peeler I guess
wielding a knife.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 4:14 pm
by Raisin
And who peels the peel?
The person peeling the peel,
is quite appealing.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 4:45 pm
by Lake
wielding a knife,
smiling, at three musketeers
is quite appealing
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 3:33 pm
by Mickpjb
Is quite appealing
while watching without feeling,
what is life dealing?
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 5:52 pm
by oranggunung
What is life dealing?
I need some endorphins, man.
Adrenaline sucks.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 8:38 pm
by Mickpjb
Adrenaline sucks,
exercise sucks, dieting sucks.
My fun? killing ducks!
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 9:53 pm
by oranggunung
My fun killing ducks
comes from the explosive plumes -
feathered confetti !
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:04 pm
by Mickpjb
‘Feathered confetti’
Said, kinky auntie Betty
With a naughty grin.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:09 pm
by Mickpjb
With a naughty grin
Uncle Tim leered at Betty,
Time to get my coat!
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:12 pm
by oranggunung
With a naughty grin
the buxom wench bid me come
hither and thither.
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:20 pm
by Mickpjb
Hither and thither
she makes me quiver all day.
Dump her tomorrow?
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:43 pm
by galaxy13
Dump her tomorrow
At the edge of the meadow
And walk down the lane
Re: Haiku Train
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:48 pm
by Mickpjb
And walk down the lane,
did you think I did not see,
the bloodied shovel?