Haiku Train

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Sun Sep 13, 2009 3:39 pm

Soap bubbles drift up
and over the haiku train
derailled by surplus syllables.
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Sun Sep 13, 2009 3:44 pm

derailled by surplus syllables --
the haiku inverts
and gets back on track.
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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Sun Sep 13, 2009 4:59 pm

(Excellent reply Nar!)

'And' gets back on track
where 'Ampersand' had faltered
being overlong.
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Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:03 pm

( :wink:)

Being overlong
was in the job description --
I had to take it.
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:15 pm

I had to take it
'though prefer to be alone.
Ahh, the price of love!
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Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:22 pm

"Ahh" - the price of love.
"Ohhh" - the benefit of love.
Hoping the twain meet.
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:47 pm

Hoping the Twain meet
his loyal readers they held
a Huck Finn party
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Sun Sep 13, 2009 6:05 pm

A Huck Finn party --
spoonerisms off-limits.
Old ones are the best.
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:06 pm

"Old ones are the best"
i once told my grandmother.
"Not nowdays" she said.
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Mon Sep 14, 2009 6:00 am

"Not nowdays" she said.
Grandfather clock
echoed
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Mon Sep 14, 2009 12:08 pm

Echoed.Tick, tock, tick,
Tock, tick, tock, tick, tock, tick, tock,
Bong! bong! Two o'clock.
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Bong! bong! Two o'clock.
Newton's cat watches
an apple fall
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 5:26 am

an apple falls
Adam gets ready
with his knife
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 11:57 am

with his knife he cut,
scything the torpid vapour,
revealing bodies.
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 12:25 pm

revealing bodies
of Maritime Pines
fog retreats
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Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:39 pm

heavy fog retreats
as a yellow school bus runs
in the morning sun
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Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:17 am

in the morning sun
dove-feather
rises
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rises
fire on the mountain
red moon
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red moon
burns copper leaves
fiery autumn
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fiery autumn
grasshopper hides in
cooling trees
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cooling trees
forward missives of Winter
loosened lives
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loosened lives
tightened on ice
frozen fish
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Fri Sep 18, 2009 10:35 am

frozen fish
hungry
for water
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hungry for water
there is a boat in the bay;
she'll sleep well tonight.
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she'll sleep well tonight
beside her twinkling dreams
floating crescent
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