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Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 7:26 pm
by oranggunung
And nothing really
hurts more than a well-placed kick
with a metric foot.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2010 11:10 am
by Marc
Wth a metric foot
he tried seducing ladies,
failing as a rule.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sun Oct 31, 2010 6:30 pm
by oranggunung
Failing as a rule -
Ethelred the unready’s
came as a surprise

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:47 pm
by terriblefish
came as a surprise,
seeing the same expression
within the cat's eyes

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:57 pm
by nar
within the cat's eyes --
spring remembered basking steps
slight hibernation.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2010 7:56 pm
by Suzanne
"Slight hibernation"
was the game she tried to play,
she wanted his cave.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 7:44 am
by pseud
she wanted his cave;
prehistoric divorce court
didn't yet exist

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 9:49 am
by Gazelle
didn't yet exist

didn't yet exist

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 7:15 pm
by oranggunung
didn’t yet exist -
the headlines for tomorrow –
until today’s news

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 7:37 pm
by Suzanne
until today's news
autumn's road- a deep cut rut,
the freeze changed all that.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 5:17 pm
by oranggunung
the freeze changed all that
the palette washed, canvas cleared
time and space frozen

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 5:24 pm
by Suzanne
Time and space frozen
expired shelf life tundra-
corn always on top.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Fri Dec 03, 2010 3:49 pm
by dedalus
Corn always on top
Daddy jiggling our mammy
punch line on the pop

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 11:32 am
by Suzanne
Punch line on the top
tainted goods in the middle
bottom line deceit.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Mon Dec 13, 2010 11:12 am
by Marc
Bottom line deceit.
Accounting false promises
in joyless profit.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:45 am
by Suzanne
in joyless profit
piled to reach a far star-
false good intentions.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 10:27 am
by arunansu
intentions
of a winter wind
rattle the window

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:14 pm
by Marc
Rattle the window,
shout at the thumping night sky,
turn away and fly.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 3:38 pm
by Suzanne
Turn away and fly
feel the lift beneath your wings
leave the weight behind.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 12:11 pm
by Marc
Leave the weight behind.
Every tortured, pounding step
sheds Christmas surplus.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 12:26 pm
by Suzanne
sheds Christmas surplus
one, two round coins at a time
until nil again.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 2:04 pm
by Marc
Until Nils again
comes round with vodka slammers
warming the new year.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 2:39 pm
by Suzanne
Warming the new year
Fresh imaginings flicker
As days grow longer.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 6:28 pm
by oggiesnr
As days grow longer
The fears of the longest nights
Fade into the past.

Re: Haiku Train

Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 11:03 am
by Suzanne
fade into the past
blend perspectives into one-
life blooms at each bend.