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Seascape - I

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 5:06 am
by arunansu
me and a lighthouse--
our clouds
crimson and blue

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skimmers fly past
light station’s crown--
eastern sky glows

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pink starfish
hunts oysters--
sand grains on my limbs

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near a nesting colony
black headed gulls
mob two carrion crows

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no breeze at noon--
one herring gull
joins my lunch

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three terns
watch the purple globe
descend

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evening waves crash
tower emits beams--
not for the dead auk

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Re: Seascape - I

Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 10:55 am
by jms
Lots of nice images / contrast here. My favourite was 'no breeze at noon', which is beautifully done.

Jon

Re: Seascape - I

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 4:49 am
by arunansu
Thanks Jon for the time and the appreciation. :)

Re: Seascape - I

Posted: Thu Jun 11, 2009 7:42 pm
by Mark Townsend
I really like your first verse...

'me and a lighthouse--
our clouds
crimson and blue'

It's very personal. I understand that feeling. I lived by the coast as a boy, and would consider secluded coves as my own. Your poem reminded me of the light houses and beaches found on the German islands, close to Denmark. Good use of imagery.

:) Mark

Re: Seascape - I

Posted: Fri Jun 12, 2009 5:05 am
by arunansu
Thanks Mark for your time on this and the appreciation.