Death to the Ewoks by Jabber the hut part 1

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peterkiggin
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Tue Aug 11, 2009 8:40 am

Death to the Ewoks by Jabber the hut part 1

Squintal infabulous fury fookers
rokky tombola infactuous fury fookers
meety grindee legus lambus eateus fury fookers
drogmal dinky shitty fury fookers
luke skywalker r2d2 stinky poooooooooo
jabber biggggy bollllllocks sittttttts on watery bed
up the hammers of goth rods
donngy baaaaaaarrreee tttrrrrrrppps stnnngggggyy
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
worm turned up.
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Wed Aug 12, 2009 8:59 pm

hard to capture him in print. nice try. you did okay. loved the movie. paisley
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Thu Aug 13, 2009 2:22 pm

Brilliant!


Love the inner You Always. Persona. persona, love this Mona Lisa.....





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Fri Aug 14, 2009 12:57 pm

Hey, Peter.

Ha - yes, nice try! A difficult task, but a nice try indeed.

L7: yes, I think I have seen him in the crowd at Upton Park ;)

Cheers,

- Neil
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Wed Aug 19, 2009 12:13 am

? just don't get it. dont realy like your poem maybe its me not to my taste . baffled newcomer.
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