Sit Down Man

[Lovely]

MOTHER'S LOVE




Faith that goodness of hope
it gives love where darkness abides,
mother and child, in bonded love,
do join in heart for Mind's Love.

Faith, this glorious seed,
beyond understanding of minds,
those who refuse to see,
that behind-------- nature is kind.

Let us hope and always pray
so truth illuminates our inner-hearts,
and by faith gain strength for this day;
strength in mind to start.

Faith is pure, a mother's love,
when we have faith in our Mother Above.
Faith is not religion though at times to be
but the knowing of Self----
Is truly all to Be.


She of faith is always fair
angels (their) golden hair,
above they ever love
love waits for a heart to care.

Have faith in goodness, faith in light,
have faith in You your inner-light.....
better to believe in something than blind as a bat;
I have no faith in that!

I am sorry religions have caused so much wars
I am sorry they have fought thousands of tears and more,
no true faith should lead men to this;
true gold is--- Higher Bliss.

[Susan-Morris3]

Very nice lovely, sort of like a hymn, could imagine singing to that enjoyable read." Better to believe in something than blind as a bat." Very nice indeed x

[Lovely]

Thank you Susan, for your input and love, ever so much Susan.


Love You, and thank you. You will find us (very powerful) if not
scaring--- but don't worry, I ever love you. Love You.............

Take care You. Peace this:- (to fill You).

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[Lovely]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jg9IVb-Psoo

[arunansu]

She of faith is always fair
angels (their) golden hair,
above they ever love
love waits for a heart to care.
- I must say, these lines do sound angelic.Smiles.

Yet what worries me, is the changing structure of your poem, though I noticed you tried to keep each line within a range of 6-8 syllables but failed to adhere to that rule in the last two strophes. Also, I might have done away with that last strophe(too telly!). Better without it!

[Lovely]

Thank you Aru. Thank you.

As we all grow: we become deeper.

L xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[Danté]

Lovely

I have to admit I couldn't write this kind of subject in this way, hat's off to those who can because it's not
easy to write this type of poem by any means, and actually post it.
You cetainly vary your approach, this kind of reminds me of a lot of the earlier stuff you posted
in subject and metrical rhyming type of form.
Yep. it's saying it in a way that gets the message across to the reader in a gentle manner
and is melodic in places, but you know I like the rigidity consitent form throughout with metrical poetry.

thanks for the read, enjoyed


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=viPWb3ieH6o

regards

Danté

[Lovely]

Thanks Dante. What a lovely song and more, your beautiful heart. Love your Vid.

Thanks Dante
L x

[Lovely]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ulhoKujT ... L&index=43

[Lovely]

For the Washburn dante http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=twFkEmcbH5M

[Lovely]

And again Dante.........http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=emYOMUoFrmQ

[Lovely]

I guess I won't sit down man!