Poetry Forum

There are many ways in which a beetroot,
seek to gain communal recognition, prove themselves
attractive to the crowd,
by displaying sophisticated emotion;
do you think 2 opposites with different tactics,
in a jocular tone be comfortable advertencys;
the risk is failure in front of others,

mr tool

By that logic, mistakes make us whole tools to tool too, tool

I am interested in syntax rather than useless emotions such as pride btw

Oh tool

I'm wondering about the singularity in using "a" in line one and how that bears grammatically under the scrutiny of the execution
of your second line...........tut, mmm I detect something of an egotistical nature welling up in this piece..........how human....smile.

I get a little stuck with the competitive element in the closing lines.......I wonder how we quantify failure here?

Dalena x

He simply lacked recognition, even when he upturned a bowl of hot beetroot onto his head as child, is all
This is just so simply amusing, tool! *falls of his perch laughing*

Thank you for this, it's made me feel welcome for a change ))) HUG (((

beetroot and delena

i thank you for your crit

you both got it right i was welcomeing beetroot to the pd,

delena and it was all done on the back of my donky called ego;

thank you both; tool