A higher plane (5th edit, a switch up)
Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 6:54 pm
A higher plane
We stand at the edge of a fjord,
a sheer cliff, a passport to a river
that heaves its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little lives in little towns, sleepy
villages with walkers walking nowhere.
From behind me, you lift my face
to the sky, point to the exuberance
of the sun, the dream-fluff clouds
that have no weight or essentials that bind,
that dance and expand, drifting with ease.
My knees weaken, my soles feel the pull
of the ancient stones beneath me, I inhale
your dizzying ambiance that surrounds me
as blood tingles through my limbs, reaches my head.
And I look at you and wonder
are you going to protect me from the fall
or destroy me after I learn to fly?
.... fourth edit......
We stand at the edge of the fjord,
a sheer cliff, full drop to a river that heaves
its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little lives in little towns, sleepy
villages with walkers walking nowhere.
From behind me, you lift my face to the sky,
point to the radiance of the sun, the silhouette
of the moon and to the dream-fluff clouds
that have no weight or elements that bind,
that dance and expand, drifting with ease.
My knees weaken, my soles feel the pull of ancient stones
beneath me, I inhale the dizzying atmosphere around me
as blood tingles through my limbs, reaches my head.
And I look at you
and wonder if you are going
to protect me from the fall
or destroy me if I learn to fly?
.........third try ---------------------------
We stand at the edge of the fjord,
sheer cliff, full drop into the river
that heaves its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little towns and little lives, sleepy
villages with walkers aimlessly walking nowhere.
And I look to the sky, see the radiance
of the sun and the face of the moon,
the dream fluff clouds that have no weight
or elements that bind, that seem to dance
and expand, spinning to float with ease.
Knees weaken at the vision you've shown,
my soles feel the pull of ancient stones
through my boots and I inhale the dizzying atmosphere
as blood pulses through my limbs, reaches my head.
And I look to you
and wonder if you are going
to protect me from the fall
or beat the shit out of me
when I land.
---Second original lol----
A higher plane
We stand at the edge of the fjord,
sheer cliff, full drop into the river
that heaves its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little towns and little lives, sleepy
villages with walkers walking nowhere.
And I look to the sky, see the wonders
of the sun and the face of the moon,
the dream fluff clouds that have no weights
or elements that burden, that seem to dance
and expand as they spin drifting with ease.
And look to you...
and I wonder if you are going
to protect me from the fall
or shear my wings off
when I land.
Original
A higher plane
We stand at the edge of the fjord,
sheer cliff, full drop into the river
that heaves its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little towns and little lives, sleepy
villages with walkers walking nowhere.
And I look to the sky, see the wonders
of the sun and the face of the moon,
the dream fluff clouds that have no weights
or elements that burden, that seem to dance
and expand as they spin drifting with ease.
And look to you...
and I wonder if you are going
to protect me from the fall
or beat the shit out of me
when I land.
.
We stand at the edge of a fjord,
a sheer cliff, a passport to a river
that heaves its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little lives in little towns, sleepy
villages with walkers walking nowhere.
From behind me, you lift my face
to the sky, point to the exuberance
of the sun, the dream-fluff clouds
that have no weight or essentials that bind,
that dance and expand, drifting with ease.
My knees weaken, my soles feel the pull
of the ancient stones beneath me, I inhale
your dizzying ambiance that surrounds me
as blood tingles through my limbs, reaches my head.
And I look at you and wonder
are you going to protect me from the fall
or destroy me after I learn to fly?
.... fourth edit......
We stand at the edge of the fjord,
a sheer cliff, full drop to a river that heaves
its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little lives in little towns, sleepy
villages with walkers walking nowhere.
From behind me, you lift my face to the sky,
point to the radiance of the sun, the silhouette
of the moon and to the dream-fluff clouds
that have no weight or elements that bind,
that dance and expand, drifting with ease.
My knees weaken, my soles feel the pull of ancient stones
beneath me, I inhale the dizzying atmosphere around me
as blood tingles through my limbs, reaches my head.
And I look at you
and wonder if you are going
to protect me from the fall
or destroy me if I learn to fly?
.........third try ---------------------------
We stand at the edge of the fjord,
sheer cliff, full drop into the river
that heaves its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little towns and little lives, sleepy
villages with walkers aimlessly walking nowhere.
And I look to the sky, see the radiance
of the sun and the face of the moon,
the dream fluff clouds that have no weight
or elements that bind, that seem to dance
and expand, spinning to float with ease.
Knees weaken at the vision you've shown,
my soles feel the pull of ancient stones
through my boots and I inhale the dizzying atmosphere
as blood pulses through my limbs, reaches my head.
And I look to you
and wonder if you are going
to protect me from the fall
or beat the shit out of me
when I land.
---Second original lol----
A higher plane
We stand at the edge of the fjord,
sheer cliff, full drop into the river
that heaves its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little towns and little lives, sleepy
villages with walkers walking nowhere.
And I look to the sky, see the wonders
of the sun and the face of the moon,
the dream fluff clouds that have no weights
or elements that burden, that seem to dance
and expand as they spin drifting with ease.
And look to you...
and I wonder if you are going
to protect me from the fall
or shear my wings off
when I land.
Original
A higher plane
We stand at the edge of the fjord,
sheer cliff, full drop into the river
that heaves its way to the Norwegian Sea,
past little towns and little lives, sleepy
villages with walkers walking nowhere.
And I look to the sky, see the wonders
of the sun and the face of the moon,
the dream fluff clouds that have no weights
or elements that burden, that seem to dance
and expand as they spin drifting with ease.
And look to you...
and I wonder if you are going
to protect me from the fall
or beat the shit out of me
when I land.
.