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Drenched

Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 4:58 am
by arunansu
This morning
with my arms open
I savor a photon-drizzle.

Satiate my thirsty eyes, April,
with the unceasing fall
of your radiant droplets.

Molten gold streams down
my shoulders, my middle aged
ribcage.

This morning, wind blows its oboe
on emerald wish-fields.

I’m a pauper
lost
in your abundance.

Re: Drenched

Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2010 5:46 pm
by anniecat
Arun, this is nice loved...the wind blowing it's oboe on those emerald wish-fields :D

Re: Drenched

Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 4:19 am
by arunansu
Thank you Anniecat for being here.Smiles.

Re: Drenched

Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 3:35 am
by bery
It sure feels humbling when you're drenched with the tears of heaven. The imagery-metaphor combination is indeed, excellent.

Re: Drenched

Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 10:48 am
by arunansu
Thank you Bery for your comments. Glad that you've liked it. :D