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Connected
Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:26 pm
by nar
Christ commented on his status.
You and eleven others like this.
You changed your relationship
status to It's Complicated.
Thirty Pieces of Silver.
Click here to accept.
PP poked you:
poke back.
- Neil.
Re: Connected
Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 8:41 pm
by Lovely
I love my Dante.........what Jesus I love my dear Dante and David.
Can I die next time I am alive............what?
There are some negatives in this work but it has opened my sad eyes
try to make her positive not for me, but yourself.
Dave
Re: Connected
Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2010 9:00 pm
by contains deet
Hey Nar,
Great subject to approach, the old "social networks" I reckon you could have done more with it though. Maybe bought the disciples in making inane comments about the latest fishing quotas in galilea? Jesus trying to get off with Mary Magdaline! Oh yes the possibilites are endless, lol.
Re: Connected
Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 12:23 am
by brianedwards
Neat. Sharp. Like this.
B.
Re: Connected
Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:56 pm
by nar
Thanks, guys.
CD: Yeah, it might be worth expanding on, but I'm a lazy writer
.
B: Thanks.
- Neil
Re: Connected
Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 8:18 pm
by ray miller
First couplet is sublime. Rest is pretty good, too.But here I have to confess my ignorance: what does it mean when someone pokes you on Facebook. Is it like just a reminder that the other person is thinking of you or what? Kate Moss keeps poking me.
Re: Connected
Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 8:32 pm
by nar
what does it mean when someone pokes you on Facebook
It means their loins ache for you.
Kate Moss keeps poking me
Fair enough Ray, but just this once.
- Neil.
Re: Connected
Posted: Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:11 am
by Cryptic Cadence
Ahahaha mate, well done! That was a bit of an amusing read, wouldn't be too popular in all circles though.